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OC Raine Heartfall (Commission) by mmidori31 OC Raine Heartfall (Commission) by mmidori31
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Love the drawing however the line on the left that represents the pelvic bone needs to be moved over a little bit to the lower left, otherwise it doesn't line up with the crotch.
I also see a couple of incomplete lines, like on the left forearm (near where the fabric starts) and some various ones in the hair.

And the lines on the bottom of the breasts and the right thigh's lines are a bit thin and wonky whilst the rest of the line art is mainly thick and smooth.

Another thing I noticed was that the shading has much inconsistency. If some bits of it were blended in a bit more I would certainly call it soft shading however, there is equal amount of cell shading as there is soft shading and it conflicts with the flow of the drawing.

Anatomy wise, you did pretty darn well except that the boobs are a little flat on the bottom and in some spots out of proportion. And when you add up the lengths of both arms the arm on the left side of the art is much longer than the other arm.

It is very good, however there is always room for improvement ^^
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Brilliant body design!! :)
The face is gorgeous and the spacing of her figure is good, but her chest is a bit oddly shaped- the shape of the top half of her boobs are just that bit to straight- the right hip looks a bit to far out in that position. but the overall position you've drawn her in is very good, some people struggle with it so you've done a great job :D
The colors seem to dark together (the shirt) but i like how you added the red tie around her neck. the bright color stands out.
I thinks it's great how you've done it more close up only showing a little bit of her legs, it makes the art more striking - in a good way-
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G4MM43T4 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh
my
dayum
so cute
hit fave
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HachimakiX23 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
So sexy!
Heart - Free W Heart - Free 
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:iconmmidori31:
mmidori31 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :iconseyedplz:
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Meema Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Very nice.
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:iconmmidori31:
mmidori31 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks~
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zzzcomics Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013   Digital Artist
Wow very sexy! ^^
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Neila078 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think.. i think her hip may have a tumor... [link]

and if we really wanna get technical, her belly button is really low/her torso is pretty short


i really like the coloring though :)
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mmidori31 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for the critic :iconseyedplz:
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Neila078 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome ^^;
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Hinater Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   General Artist
superbe
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